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Level 77 : Legendary Turtle
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Here is a small future city on Whats left of planet mars.

I mostly made this because i have not entered a finished project yet for a pmc competition.

Bad Story......... ... .. .  .  .    .   .  

As i gasp for my last breath i looked up to see my wife drifting away into the dark cold black of space.
BBBBzzzzzz The school bell rings And the teacher yells over the clutter of excited voices
"We will continue on the diary of Dan Rogers in tomorrows class.
I headed for the doorway and was shoved from behind, I truned around to see my best frend sam.
He says quietly to me "Do you want to go surf the slime tunnels" I think to myself i would love to but i say to sam
" No i have to help my with the house cleaning or i dont get my pocket money this week".Sam is aready out the door and yelling
"See you tomorrow" I go home help mum and have dinner and go to bed. The next day i turn up to school and start class.
The teacher starts reading agane.

"As i gasp for my last breath i looked up to see my wife drifting away into the dark cold black of space.She is aleady gone.
I was just about to give up when i could hear a hissing sound next to me. It was a broken oxegen pipe on the road side. In my last efforts i rolled over and stuck
the pipe into the crack in my helmet.
All i could think about was my dear wife as i was getting my breath back.
I seen when the meteorite hit mars, she was out of the hover car and the shock wave was to powerful without some kind of cover.
I looked over to where the city used to be and all that was left was nine buildings it seemed that we was on the last piece of mars.
The rest of the planet had turned to rubble and fire.I must do somthing or i will die!!!. Then it hit me i remembered that we had a backup helmet in the back of the car.
I pulled the oxagen pipe out of my helmet and tryed
to cover the hole with my hand as i race to the rolled over car.YESSS it was still in good shape. I shoved it on my aching head and grabed the medical kit from out
of the storage box.
I stumbled down the road maybe ten  meters and fell over in a crying heap.


Day 2 "The last piece of mars"

Last night i did not move at all i just went to sleep where i was.It was quiet grassy park so i got a good rest.I looked over to the car and it remind me of what
happen.My house,wife,life gone in a flash. I wonder if there are other survivors left.
I look over the hill of the park and it binds me the bright light of the rest of the planet is still burning up in the horizon.
I think i can hear a hover car coming "yes" it is.He pulls over and offers me a ride. I wipe the grass of me and jump in, He ask if im ok. I dont want to talk about it.
He says "i just lost my hole family" Without trying to burst into tears.
I ask him where he is going.He answered me with "im going to city center or whats left of it.
We arrive at the car park of the jar9 building, one of the main buildings in the city center.I get out of the car and looked around all the buildings are still standing.
The driver just standing there cursing at what had happen.I start to make my way over to what looks like a group of around 40 people.
There is a man on a microphone saying We will all be ok. I have tracked the planets trajectory and we are safe for another two thousand years antill we come in contact with the Nova Torris Star
.We still have working food and water processers.


The teacher closes the hologram and says "The year now is 1999 of new mars, God save us".

The end


Its my piece of mars bar, no its my piece "Punch,kick bite"
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  • Aeos1674
  • Level 1
  • New Miner
  • December 10, 2017, 8:35 am
wait... but if 2 years have passed since it was uploaded and they had 1 year left shouldnt they all be destroyed by now? :)
  • Aeos1674
  • Level 1
  • New Miner
  • December 10, 2017, 8:34 am
I just downloaded it- didn't know what I was missing. 6 stars out of 5!
  • Spectre
  • Level 49
  • Master Mage
  • October 21, 2016, 5:07 am
Wow. xD
  • Alberfesa1
  • Level 12
  • Journeyman Architect
  • April 9, 2016, 9:21 am
Simplemente Incríble , sin palabras, Buen trabajo
  • Skript
  • Level 1
  • New Miner
  • February 10, 2016, 9:49 pm
Jar9, I admire your build style and skill. I have taken interest in this work especially, you see I play a game known as Starmade. In short, It is Minecraft In space. I would like to port this build for use In starmade. Regardless of your reply I plan to use this model for private use without distribution however I would like your permission to distribute the modified file to the Starmade community here, starmadedock.net/content/ Thank you for your consideration. -SKript
Oh my Gawd! This looks friggin' awesome m8!
  • babbajagga
  • Level 54
  • Grandmaster Architect
  • December 25, 2015, 4:01 am
love the architecture :)
btw. could you add closeups of the flying machines? from far they look great, I would like to see them in a better detail :))
  • CodyTheLion
  • Level 32
  • Artisan Architect
  • December 12, 2015, 12:16 pm
Wow and you gave a diamond to my entry! I feel honored :)
  • GrayRemnant
  • Level 56
  • Grandmaster Senpai
  • December 11, 2015, 9:13 pm
Yes!  Exactly who I wanted to see in this competition!  Great job, buddy!  :D
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 11, 2015, 9:24 pm
Thanks GrayRemnant, Its nothing to good but its somthing.
  • Fighterbear12
  • Level 50
  • Grandmaster Musician
  • December 11, 2015, 12:42 am
Looks as if it crosses the map's borders, but it doesn't!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 12, 2015, 1:25 am
It was on one road but i just fixed it.
  • cnorgren
  • Level 65
  • High Grandmaster Architect
  • December 10, 2015, 9:23 pm
So much in a small space! Good Job!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 12, 2015, 1:38 am
Thanks,Yer its getting down to 14fps in some places with my lap top. Be one of the most laggy/dense maps ive made.
  • Soybeam
  • Level 20
  • Expert Ranger
  • December 10, 2015, 4:40 pm
Reminds me of this sorta short story by Ray Bradbury, "Dark they were, and golden-eyed." It's an old exagerated Mars story about a fam who are... nvm I'm not gonna spoil it.
Here's the story: Click here :I
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 5:04 pm
I started reading some of it looks like a good read,Thanks for the nice comments.
  • Soybeam
  • Level 20
  • Expert Ranger
  • December 10, 2015, 4:30 pm
MUM GET THE CAMERA I FOUND SOMETHING KEWL ON PMC!
  • Mydelko
  • Level 45
  • Master Architect
  • December 10, 2015, 8:10 am
You build this project with friend?






Awesome project ;)
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 2:20 pm
Thanks Mydelko , Sadly i dont have any friends in the town im in that play minecraft. I was building for almost two weeks with around 4-6 hours sleep a day to get it done. I only had 4 days of real life work in that time so i had a lot of time on my hands to get it done.
  • drnicholasb
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Modder
  • December 10, 2015, 3:13 am
This is amazing!!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 2:22 pm
Glad you like it drnicholasb,Thanks.
  • drnicholasb
  • Level 7
  • Apprentice Modder
  • December 10, 2015, 4:48 pm
no problem! you are amazing builder! you need more Love for your work!!!
  • DrVortex303
  • Level 30
  • Artisan Toast
  • December 9, 2015, 5:47 pm
Looks really nice. Great renders too ;) Good luck buddy!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:39 am
Thanks DrVortex303, happy you liked it.
Diamond for the story, I wasn't expecting the plot twist. Lol
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:38 am
Cheers lol yer bit chessy but it would be a cool movie maybe.
  • TwizZted_uP
  • Level 32
  • Artisan Cowboy
  • December 9, 2015, 5:47 am
Very nice comeback!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:36 am
Thanks TwizZted_uP, much appreciated.
Nice to see your back :D

Also epic build ;)
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:30 am
Great to be back thanks Master G, I sort of stopped putting projects on pmc because i was at such a high lvl and its so hard to build stuff worthy of a high lvl. Plus i have had less spare time on my hands as well.Im still working somtimes on swamp lake city.
Haha No Problem ;)  Well you definetly deserve to be Level.67 ;)

Also a Swamp Lake City sounds really cool :D
  • Xoyjaz
  • Level 63
  • High Grandmaster Architect
  • December 9, 2015, 4:51 am
Very nice indeed
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:23 am
Thanks Xoyjaz.
  • Norzeteus
  • Level 67
  • High Grandmaster Architect
  • December 8, 2015, 10:34 pm
  • very beautiful, as alwaysdia 4 you!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:22 am
Thanks Norzeteus. Cheers for the diamond as well glad you liked it.
Do you think that there could be more interiors? its always nice to have some more of those, it will really help liven up the map. good job by the way.
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 9, 2015, 2:39 am
Im trying to add more im just really slow at furniture. And if i copy and paste floors it lags to much. So i have to hand make every floor.Its going to be a long night
  • Soybeam
  • Level 20
  • Expert Ranger
  • December 8, 2015, 3:10 pm
Seems sort of cramped, but I'll give you a diamond.
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:29 pm
Thanks, i wanted that look of roads and trains winding thought the city.
  • IXAnakinXI
  • Level 39
  • Artisan Architect
  • December 8, 2015, 1:58 pm
The king is back! Long time no post, jar, hehe. Amazing as always :)
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:30 pm
Thanks IXAnakinXI
  • Vulpine
  • Level 1
  • New Architect
  • December 8, 2015, 1:49 pm
Amazing! Your builds never fail to impress me xD
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:32 pm
Thanks heaps, Im glad you enjoy my builds GlitchKnight.
This is AWESOME! I really hope you win!
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:35 pm
Thanks AnythingNotSteve. There be lots more better ones then this. Building are a bit plane looking in this map i could not come up with to many go ideas.
Well, I (and many other people) think it looks awesome! You are the best builder I know by far!
  • CraftyFoxe
  • Site Moderator
  • Level 72
  • Legendary Fox
  • December 8, 2015, 11:17 am
You filled up the space pretty well. In art we call this Horror vacui.
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:40 pm
Yer wanted that adventurous cluttered look .
  • CraftyFoxe
  • Site Moderator
  • Level 72
  • Legendary Fox
  • December 9, 2015, 2:14 pm
Do you have any good tips to build better architecture?
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 10, 2015, 12:54 am
Idk really i just spend hours on google and take in as many ideas as i can of rl architecture . Some times i close my eyes and get a shape of a building and put it on paper.Most of the stuff i do are from goggle.most of the wacky stuff i have made up my self. After a while i can now look at a picture and know if it will look good in minecraft.I find architecture renders are the best to work with if you are doing remakes.
  • CraftyFoxe
  • Site Moderator
  • Level 72
  • Legendary Fox
  • December 10, 2015, 11:49 am
thanks, I did something like that before like looking at buildings in my art history book, didn't know you did that too.
  • Julienboi
  • Level 29
  • Expert Taco
  • December 8, 2015, 9:24 am
mmmmh
  • CaptainTS
  • Level 5
  • Apprentice Artist
  • December 8, 2015, 9:09 am
Just so you know, you'd better cut out the stuff that is hanging outside the map, because in the rules of the contest it says that anything that is outside of the map won't be considered part of it.
I'm saying this just so you don't be disqualified, because it's a real masterpiece! :D
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:42 pm
Thanks i checked it a  few time but i give i a good check tonight.
  • Kazla
  • Level 43
  • Master Geek
  • December 8, 2015, 9:08 am
Looks you'll at least be a finalist! Good luck, may the future be with you.
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 3:44 pm
Thanks OGS16, I was happy to just participate.
  • eagoy
  • Level 47
  • Master Lava Rider
  • December 8, 2015, 9:01 am
This a shame only one picture so far. Just curious, but do you know you can uncheck the box "publish live" so you can work on ease on the PMC page layout, uploading pics, adding description and everything else?

Anyway this alone is good enough for a diamond, but I have a stubborn principle not to diamond stuff with only one picture, so please: notify me when you have finished the darn page so I can/will diamond it.
  • po53iden
  • Level 41
  • Master Architect
  • December 8, 2015, 8:37 am
Welcome Back to MC m5
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 8:41 am
Thanks Po53iden,I been on mc a little bit in the last few months but have not been building any big projects.
I'm jealous :D
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 8:37 am
Im sick of looking at the dam thing after almost two weeks lol.
  • SexyDerp
  • Level 23
  • Expert Architect
  • December 8, 2015, 6:49 pm
Tell me about it... i cant even look at my map without feeling sick and tired... worst thing is, mines still not even done :(

Anyways Nice job man! looks very cool and well built!
  • Feriach
  • Level 45
  • Master Lumberjack
  • December 8, 2015, 8:28 am
God damn, jar. Well done.
  • jar9
  • Level 77
  • Legendary Turtle
  • December 8, 2015, 8:33 am
Thanks feriach, love the map you made great stuff.
  • Feriach
  • Level 45
  • Master Lumberjack
  • December 8, 2015, 9:48 am
Thanks, it's nothing compared to your project though :D

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