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The last piece of mars

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jar9's Avatar jar9
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Here is a small future city on Whats left of planet mars.

I mostly made this because i have not entered a finished project yet for a pmc competition.

Bad Story......... ... .. .  .  .    .   .  

As i gasp for my last breath i looked up to see my wife drifting away into the dark cold black of space.
BBBBzzzzzz The school bell rings And the teacher yells over the clutter of excited voices
"We will continue on the diary of Dan Rogers in tomorrows class.
I headed for the doorway and was shoved from behind, I truned around to see my best frend sam.
He says quietly to me "Do you want to go surf the slime tunnels" I think to myself i would love to but i say to sam
" No i have to help my with the house cleaning or i dont get my pocket money this week".Sam is aready out the door and yelling
"See you tomorrow" I go home help mum and have dinner and go to bed. The next day i turn up to school and start class.
The teacher starts reading agane.

"As i gasp for my last breath i looked up to see my wife drifting away into the dark cold black of space.She is aleady gone.
I was just about to give up when i could hear a hissing sound next to me. It was a broken oxegen pipe on the road side. In my last efforts i rolled over and stuck
the pipe into the crack in my helmet.
All i could think about was my dear wife as i was getting my breath back.
I seen when the meteorite hit mars, she was out of the hover car and the shock wave was to powerful without some kind of cover.
I looked over to where the city used to be and all that was left was nine buildings it seemed that we was on the last piece of mars.
The rest of the planet had turned to rubble and fire.I must do somthing or i will die!!!. Then it hit me i remembered that we had a backup helmet in the back of the car.
I pulled the oxagen pipe out of my helmet and tryed
to cover the hole with my hand as i race to the rolled over car.YESSS it was still in good shape. I shoved it on my aching head and grabed the medical kit from out
of the storage box.
I stumbled down the road maybe ten  meters and fell over in a crying heap.


Day 2 "The last piece of mars"

Last night i did not move at all i just went to sleep where i was.It was quiet grassy park so i got a good rest.I looked over to the car and it remind me of what
happen.My house,wife,life gone in a flash. I wonder if there are other survivors left.
I look over the hill of the park and it binds me the bright light of the rest of the planet is still burning up in the horizon.
I think i can hear a hover car coming "yes" it is.He pulls over and offers me a ride. I wipe the grass of me and jump in, He ask if im ok. I dont want to talk about it.
He says "i just lost my hole family" Without trying to burst into tears.
I ask him where he is going.He answered me with "im going to city center or whats left of it.
We arrive at the car park of the jar9 building, one of the main buildings in the city center.I get out of the car and looked around all the buildings are still standing.
The driver just standing there cursing at what had happen.I start to make my way over to what looks like a group of around 40 people.
There is a man on a microphone saying We will all be ok. I have tracked the planets trajectory and we are safe for another two thousand years antill we come in contact with the Nova Torris Star
.We still have working food and water processers.


The teacher closes the hologram and says "The year now is 1999 of new mars, God save us".

The end


Its my piece of mars bar, no its my piece "Punch,kick bite"
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12/10/2017 1:35 pm
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Aeos1674
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wait... but if 2 years have passed since it was uploaded and they had 1 year left shouldnt they all be destroyed by now? :)
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12/10/2017 1:34 pm
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Aeos1674
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I just downloaded it- didn't know what I was missing. 6 stars out of 5!
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10/21/2016 9:07 am
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Spectre
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Wow. xD
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04/09/2016 1:21 pm
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Alberfesa1
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Simplemente Incríble , sin palabras, Buen trabajo
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02/11/2016 2:49 am
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Skript
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Jar9, I admire your build style and skill. I have taken interest in this work especially, you see I play a game known as Starmade. In short, It is Minecraft In space. I would like to port this build for use In starmade. Regardless of your reply I plan to use this model for private use without distribution however I would like your permission to distribute the modified file to the Starmade community here, starmadedock.net/content/ Thank you for your consideration. -SKript
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01/11/2016 12:50 am
Level 68 : High Grandmaster Architect
IG-FredMcWaffe
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Oh my Gawd! This looks friggin' awesome m8!
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12/25/2015 9:01 am
Level 57 : Grandmaster Procrastinator
babbajagga
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love the architecture :)
btw. could you add closeups of the flying machines? from far they look great, I would like to see them in a better detail :))
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12/12/2015 5:16 pm
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CodyTheLion
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Wow and you gave a diamond to my entry! I feel honored :)
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12/12/2015 2:13 am
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GrayRemnant
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Yes!  Exactly who I wanted to see in this competition!  Great job, buddy!  :D
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12/12/2015 2:24 am
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jar9
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Thanks GrayRemnant, Its nothing to good but its somthing.
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