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Death Order's Avatar Death Order
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Hello, this is my first battleship, the only reason I actually made this because i was deciding the fate of the USS Atlantic and decided it should be sunk by a Russian battleship, so I had to make one...

The RNS Moscow was launched in 1956, she was a medium sized battleship, she is famous for sinking the USS Atlantic, when it came too close towards the ship, they blew up the sub and watched it sank! She accidentally hit a large rock in 1966, the Atlantic got revenge on her killer!

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Tonnage: 40,000
Length: 125m
Crew: 300
Marines: 1000
Officers: 30
Service: 1957-1966
Fate: sunk when it hit a rock
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12/02/2017 4:29 pm
Level 42 : Master Architect
Death Order
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what do u think of the render guys?
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12/03/2017 1:28 am
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G00DG4ME
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About the render, it looks unrealistic. No offence, but it needs rework. The sky colour influences the water colour. However I would recommend keeping the sky clear, change the sun position, make it look dramatic, change the colour of the water greenish. Disable emitters, and make the target SSP 400-1000.
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12/03/2017 1:18 am
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G00DG4ME
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Otherwise, nice. The rope would need a little work though, I love the new paint on the battleship, however the black line should be at the water line. Your hull looks superb, but the top needs work. Try smoothing things, add more curves, make it look complicated, and not like a bunch of blocks. For the front and back cannons, use slabs for the barrels and use stone brick to get a smoother look.
I hope you take no offence from my advice, but after seeing those people bullying you, on your USS Atlantic, I really want to help you improve. Hope this helps.
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